{"id":10811,"date":"2018-05-27T15:12:47","date_gmt":"2018-05-27T05:12:47","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/?p=10811"},"modified":"2018-08-25T12:38:11","modified_gmt":"2018-08-25T02:38:11","slug":"46-great-opening-lines-40","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/?p=10811","title":{"rendered":"46 Great Opening Lines: 40"},"content":{"rendered":"<blockquote><p>It&#8217;s pre-dawn, all dark. Breeding season.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>First words of &#8216;Breeding Season&#8217;, Amanda Niehaus, in\u00a0<em>Overland<\/em>, Spring 2017<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve been buying literary journals for a couple of years now, reading short stories to see how writers write in the 21st century. My translations are mostly of 19th-century stories, so I need to prompt myself to read today&#8217;s writing. It&#8217;s never good to get stuck in the past.<\/p>\n<p><em>Overland<\/em> is one of the Australian journals I&#8217;ve been reading. Not every piece is to my taste, but there&#8217;s usually one in each issue that I read and re-read. &#8216;Breeding Season&#8217; was such a story, drawing me in with the very word breeding, not in the title but in the first line. And then, later, the mention of an antechinus.<\/p>\n<p>I once caught sight of an antechinus in a sawn tree trunk in Wangaratta. I&#8217;d heard about them, how they resemble mice and rats, how we can confuse them all, but this one was prettier than any rat and I suspected that the crevices of the old trunk were more suited to a native marsupial than an introduced species. He stood still long enough for me to snap his photo. I wrote about the antechinus and my trip to Wangaratta in an earlier blog <a href=\"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/?p=5876\">post<\/a>.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_10815\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-10815\" style=\"width: 397px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-10815 \" src=\"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1-728x1024.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"397\" height=\"558\" srcset=\"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1-728x1024.jpg 728w, https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1-213x300.jpg 213w, https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1-768x1080.jpg 768w, https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1-1200x1687.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/DSC04594-1.jpg 1662w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 397px) 100vw, 397px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-10815\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Antechinus, North Beaches Reserve, Wangaratta (river beaches not ocean beaches&#8230;)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>To return to the great opening line: my interest was triggered by the word breeding, evidence that the first words of a story can click somewhere in the reader&#8217;s experience, or in their hopes and fears. I wasn&#8217;t disappointed, for within &#8216;Breeding Season&#8217;, Amanda Niehaus writes about the jelly-bean sized babies of the antechinus and a woman&#8217;s own baby growing inside her.<\/p>\n<p>I read this prize-winning story in my copy of <em>Overland<\/em> but it&#8217;s also <a href=\"https:\/\/overland.org.au\/previous-issues\/issue-228\/short-story-prize-amanda-niehaus\/\">available online<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>*<\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s pre-dawn, all dark. Breeding season. First words of &#8216;Breeding Season&#8217;, Amanda Niehaus, in\u00a0Overland, Spring 2017 I&#8217;ve been buying literary journals for a couple of years now, reading short stories to see how writers write in the 21st century. My translations are mostly of 19th-century stories, so I need to prompt myself to read today&#8217;s &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/?p=10811\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;46 Great Opening Lines: 40&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1088,20],"tags":[487,1239,1238,885,1187,871,1241,2,1242,246,1240,7,8,21,270],"class_list":["post-10811","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-46-great-opening-lines","category-my-photos","tag-21st-century-literature","tag-amanda-niehaus","tag-antechinus","tag-australian-animals","tag-australian-literature","tag-australian-mammal","tag-australian-writing","tag-literature","tag-marsupial","tag-opening-lines","tag-overland-journal","tag-photography","tag-photos-2","tag-postaday","tag-writing"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10811","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=10811"}],"version-history":[{"count":22,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10811\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":11273,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/10811\/revisions\/11273"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=10811"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=10811"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/soundslikewish.org\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=10811"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}